Hey, I just wanted to test by creative writing skills and wrote part of a story... So, yea! just comment below on how i did. Write how i could improve it or just anything.
Here is is...
In the city of Starsaw, crime is also lurking, as well as those fighting it…
“Dang it!” said the women as she notice she forgot something.
“What’s wrong Martha?” said Martha’s friend.
“Oh! I forgot my wallet, of all things!” Martha continues nervously. “Could you... Perhaps, Lily, lend me some money..?”
“Oh! Of course! However, I don’t have money on me. Luckily, my bank is only a couple blocks down. Let’s Walk.“ Lily said gladly.
After making it to the bank, Lily goes in herself while Martha waits outside.
“Hello, Ma’am. What would you like to do today?” said the Bank teller.
“I would like to withdraw $30 please.” Says Lily.
“Here you are, have a nice day.” Said the Teller.
Lily then leaves the banks and hands the money over to Martha. They walk back to the store. Suddenly, as they make it back, they see someone messing with Lilly’s car.
“Hey, you over their! Get away from my car!” Lilly yells.
The guy runs away from the car with something in his hands. He is, however, pursued by someone not far behind.
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